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Reviews For: Do I have to grow up? : Through the portal part 2 - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

WTFTMIAnimeFreak
2008-10-04
ch 31,
abuseInteresting and I find Max funny. I like Max with her attitude, I wish I don't need to pay attention but the same time catch everything. So, I don't need to listen to the teachers talking but I also know what they are saying. You get what I mean? No? I don't either.
Miorochi
2008-10-01
ch 31,
abuseI wuv Hunny he is so cute and sweet!! he loves cake and sweets like i do too!! good chappie!! harry is all hyper from the chocolate. . .Great. . . .
Miorochi
2008-09-30
ch 30,
abusedid light throw the bottle or did someone else?

how could she make fun of the TWINS!! they are my favorites beside hunny!
Miorochi
2008-09-26
ch 29,
abuseYaY!! she ahs her meories back!! is she going to go to ouran? cause you wouldnt put the host club in there without a reason. . . and she will most likely get a fanclub if Mu is good looking. . .
Miorochi
2008-09-23
ch 28,
abuselights back. . . whoopie! i cant belive they made her lose her memory!! I bet dumbledore was doing that to manipulate her. . .
hiiiiiiii
2008-09-20
ch 27, anon.
abusethat innuendo in chap 22 sounds worse if you consider the fact most guys keep their phones in thier back pockets.
Miorochi
2008-09-17
ch 27,
abusethe universe is so screwed. . . . hehehe, will her genjutsu fall off and reveal her ears and stuff during the tornament?? that would be a funny twist. . .
Miorochi
2008-09-15
ch 26,
abusewow, what a good plan!! i cant wait to read it get acted out!! XD
Gabubi-baka
2008-09-15
ch 26,
abuseEEP! Tes awesomeness. I know nothing about Death Note, yet I'm hooked! This makes me want to read the whole series. I shall steal it from my 'daughter'. Anywho, great couple chapters! Jus wanted to let you know that I have not died and that I'm still a huge fan of this fanfiction!
Kari-chan-14
2008-09-13
ch 25, anon.
abusethats a really good crossover. School sucks huh? totally idiotic
Miorochi
2008-09-13
ch 25,
abusehehehe, she has the death note, and now rem is following her around. . . she is officially disguised as a guy, too! this story just keeps getting more and more intresting!
Zeni Ooru
2008-09-13
ch 25,
abuseMan, that was funny. But I do feel sorry for you right now with all that stuff you have to do.
Miorochi
2008-09-12
ch 24,
abusewow, shes gunna steal misa's death note. . . . hm. . . . I cant beleive light!!
Miorochi
2008-09-08
ch 23,
abuseum. . . let me guess. . . max?? Sasuke?? so are you gunna have harry and draco transfer?? wouldnt let like be taking those characters out of the story or something?? im glad you updated and yeah you would be in 11th grade! XD
Zeni Ooru
2008-09-08
ch 23,
abuseHey, I'm actually Zene, because everytime I come onto fanfiction I forget to login. But the story is getting good! Yay!
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