I've always appreciated your work in FFVII and I'm glad to see something new. I enjoyed the read, as I always have. Thanks for writing.

Hey there! I know I'm a little late in reviewing this but I just wanted to say that it's beautiful.

This was really beautiful. I loved the flow, and just how much sense it made. It was great!

Your writing is always so lovely. :)

There was one tiny bit that I just can't agree with: 'some cruel part of you wishes the sky would hurry up and fall.' However important Aerith is to him, Cloud has more to live and fight for than just her.

Wow... you write beautifully. I loved your story, although I'm not part of this fandom (I probably would have included some concrit if I had been). The second-person narration really enhanced this story, as did subtle phrases like this one:

"...you lie, swearing black is white."

Wonderful writing - this is going in my favourites!
Mistrali