Excellent.

Rate: A

Very nice story, very well written. Nice imagry,you did a very good job of explaining how the characters were feeling at the time and how much it hurt to be at the wall.

Very nice, keep it up.

Nice story and very well written.

What a touching story. Thanks so much for sharing.

Lynn

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Very nicely done. I've been to the Wall, and it really brings out the emotion.