I think I like it when Jareth wins. ^_^ Do you have any idea how adorable this is for a fangirl of these two? (Though I am sure you have a small idea-- being it as you were the authoress to this adorable story.) Sarah and Jareth will always fight like a married couple...married or not. I really like that he threw HER in the air to catch her. Teehee.

~ Val

Oh I love this! Just a sweet little insight into day to day "Normal" life in the Goblin King's Castle. Thanks for sharing it! -Clare

That was so funny! Baby talk and "the game"... lol I loved it!

lmao! this is brillance in story form!

i freekin' love it! :D

XxoxX

That was simply adorable. I loved the last bit.

That was fantastic! XD "...Nah." Awesome fic!

So cute! I loved this, it was a true "Family" moment if you ask me, and I wish that it could have been true in the movie. Great job!

aww, it's lovely

keep going


awesome humor fic

I love it when Jareth says 'If I could get the goblins to take you away, I would!' hahaha this is so funny and so sweet you rock! thanks for this

-laughs hysterically-

That's going straight to my favorites! Loved it!!

This is absolutely adorable. I especially like the parts where Jareth talks baby talk to Merak, and then tells Sarah she shouldn't talk baby talk to him, and the ending line. That would be Jareth. Very nice.

That was adorable! Oh I love Married!Sarah/Jareth fics, especially when they have a little tot themselves. So much fluff, it makes me giddy! Hilarious, too...nice job!

This chapter is good, and cool. Have a nice day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-)

wah! It is so cute!XD It is one of the cutest scene between the two I've seen!^^! :D