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BlackBaka21 2008-10-27 . chapter 1
i'm obsessed too!! ;DD anyways, great fanfic!!

BB21
Part of Youth 2008-06-05 . chapter 1
This is funny, the repressed feeling of Mamori into proper exposition. Another good Yoichi-Mamori fanfic.
lescribble 2008-05-27 . chapter 1
:D You're not the only one who's obsessed with HiruMamo. XD Love the fic short and sweet :) I do hope you don't end this as a one shot though. *hint* *hint* :D
snowbells 2008-05-27 . chapter 1
hey,this one is really good and sweet!
hope you`ll write more hirumamo.hirumamo is my fav pairing!
darkmage009 2008-05-27 . chapter 1
*still squealing*
What a nice one-shot.
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More, I demand more!
devil cat07 2008-05-26 . chapter 1
Nice one! *thumbs up* Heh, as hot as he looks, eh? I can't wait to read more from you! '_^v
windam2611 2008-05-26 . chapter 1
nice one^^
Mayuzu 2008-05-26 . chapter 1
Aw, love it a lot!
Hiruma is just irresistable, isn't he ^_~
More more more, please!
Love how you describe Hiruma's charm and Mamo's clumsiness.
HelloSugah 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
Wow, bravo! Great POV. You really captured both characters really well! Hope to read more from you :)
cantabilesonata 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
Gya? that's it? the ending came abruptly...but i liked this story! :D i always loved HiruMamo pairing and god...can't stop thinking bout them XD haha!
besroq 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
aha,somebody need a fire resistance now, or is it both? things are just going to spice up!!
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