I love this.
I am a HUGE shipper for Janny, and I think you captured the emotions of Emma, Sean, Toby and everyone else there.
I like this version better than the actual episode, because there is no stupid Damien and Jay is there.
:)

not too bad. i like : D my favorite pair though is Spinner and Darcy

This is a fantastic take on RTT. You did a good job of showing Jay's softer side without making him TOO soft. I also liked the line "two other old friends stood together, awkwardly away from the rest of the group, re-evaluating their lost friendship."