aww! Too cute. It was really well written and everyone was IC too. I think I've fallen in love with your One Piece fics :)l

lovely. thanks for the read.

WOW this was an extraordinary story!

...I cried when I read this. I CRIED! Thank you for blessing us with this story!
*mumbles* ...Odd, I don't cry at funirals but THIS...

Short and sweet. Excellent work. ^^

Aw such an awesome ending. It was flufftastic a really good fic.

It's quite rare to see intelligent villains in the One Piece world. I'm impressed with the execution of this kidnapping. This is a very interesting premise.

i saw this on deviant art so i decided to check it out here. nice story but u should continue it.

aw. this story was soo good!!

loved the first chapter!

Hmm, I guess it's understandable that Luffy would go over the line to save someone if he felt it was just the right thing. A bit ooc, but it's worth it.

Nice ending, doesn't become too fluffy or anything distracting. And Luffy certainly does seem like a person who might not know what love is precisely.

Great story overall. I really enjoyed it. You should check out my stories sometime, I've got 3 based on OP. You might get a kick out of them.

Keep up the wonderful work!

Phew, pretty intense. I wonder if Luffy really did go through with it. I mean, he and the other have never killed before (well maybe Zoro and Robin) but this is pretty heavy.

Oh well, onto chapter 4 and the conclusion.

Good idea to include the flashback, helps for anyone who might have felt a bit blindsided by the sudden start in the first chapter.

Things look pretty tense. Damn, gotta see how this ends.

Hm, definately a bold move to start it just in the middle of things. But I like it.

Now I must see the end of it!

that was adorable!
loved itt