That was excellent. I wish you would do more Transporter stories...anyhow, this would be a great part of Frank's backstory..i think he is exactly the kind of man to do something like this for a friend. Very well done.

Hey, where's the rest, good job with the writing! I just wished you had finished the story, it's a great start!

Hey, where's the rest, good job with the writing! I just wished you had finished the story, it's a great start!

this is sweet and in-character. i love this!

Intersting idea for his background/possible family connections. I like the idea. Did he 'train' her too?

I really like this. Ollie is an excellent OC and the whole atmosphere feels right. Great job :) I really want egg and toast now!

I liked much your FICS, that's the personality that would Frank Martin in that situation

me gusto mucho tu fics, esa es la personalidad que tendría Frank Martin en esa situación

I love your story please write more soon.