I understand what you say, about your lack of knowledge about ship-to-ship combat in the SW universe, but I would not worry about it: see, for example, the battle in Episode III and compare it to the one in Episode VI.
They are utterly different, so much that there is virtually nothing in common.
So I don't see much chance for you to break the canon.
Furthermore, a battle can be described more on its outlines, rather than on the technicalities, and many would prefer it such. Consider the Thrawn trilogy.

Aside from this, I would really urge you to reconsider about writing a new chapter: there is simply so much, and so original, to write about a DSM Revan/DS Bastila that it's simply staggering.
Plus, your characterization of Kreia is easily one of the best I've ever read, something remarkable, given her complexity.

In any case, truly good work.

Keep on writing, i love kotor and the Revan and Bstila-love story

Please, please continue this awesome story I simply crave to read more.

A damn shame you've put this on hold because the potenial is immense. I don't usually like DSM Revan stories but your's has impressed me. In particular the relationship between Revan and Bastila, the Master/Apprentice lover complex is great to read.

Also the introduction of KOTOR 2's antagonists is a fascinating plot device, keeps the story fresh.

Again I can only hope you pick this up one day.

Great story.

you published this in 08. it is now 11, and im still looking for fics like this. kotor is an amazing universe, and im only disappointed that there arent more dsm fics like this.

im actually surprised i havent found this before.

If you would like I could provide some of the space battle data that you need like the weapons ranges for some of the ships in this era and possibly rough estimates of the sub-light speeds.

Nice.

finsh the story

excellent! I loved the games, and I see that you are planning to introduce the 'threat' that was talked about in KoToR2.

I like your Revan, and your Bastila is very believable as well.

keep up the good work and write fast!

sweet keep it up

It's a great story. Please update !

Awesome...

Close to the best KOTOR fan-fic i've come accross. Revan is exactly how i'd imagined him in the game, both as light and dark. And his previous connection with the exile provides added tension. Bastila is also brilliant, her struggle to comprehend Revans true power is well drawn out, and suits her character in the game extraordinarily well. Thats one hell of a start.

Keep it up!

Ah; looks whose back!

lol Yes; a female POV can be quite challenging, dear. But you did well, so no worries there.

The second chapter, while shorter and having much more emphasis on fighting and general plot, was enjoyable as well. I love Bastila to death, so having a chapter with her point of view, which I'm extremely glad you've done btw, is a welcome addition. Keep it up and, like before; I'll be waiting for the next chap.

Quite good. I'm personally not a big fan of non-canon but your story seems interesting. Plus it has a male Revan which is pretty rare for some reason. Much more creative than a lot of the stuff around here. I think you should continue, but try reading the comics or wikipedia for some info about what Revan was like, although you've done pretty well. Nice work all in all. DO continue!