even though i began reading this story after it was published i will say it was worth it and very well written I like how in this chap greg transformed thanny himself and thought it was strange greg killed his self and I was sad Rita died... I thought daivd wasnt going to make it for a moment

david alwaysnmessing with kevin lol and how are they gonna get down, i like how they had to extract the blood with out the help from nikkoli's device

you need nikolahi to shoot something at it to draw the blood out then give thanny some shock threapy lol

i feel so bad for george he has gone through soooo much hell the only thing missing is him sky diving

our protaganists just dont get a break

im amazed that geroge survuved after bening swallowed by the hunter gamma

glad they found water they have been running non stop most of the time

welcome to theclub kevin i think cindy and jim are the only two left

i was hoping marvin wouldnt be left behind...

no lickers are prowling around?

the nerve gas was the only annyoing thing about this scanerio other than that it was fine

damn it jim you would attract the freaking zombies

even the what happened at this part was different it was epic to see alyssiea put the axeman down and dororthy

classic horror movie moment with the axe man and there at that place during night?! it was bad enough being there in daylight fog

dear lord now they have to deal with the Axe Man and i believe his wifes name was dorthy