This has potential. You should definitely continue :)

I like this story! Especially the hunting for Susan's heart part. Nice Job!

CONTINUE! I couldn't stop laughing and was SO cute!

Omg please continue I am begging!

Great story!

oh come on...u cant leave off there...y this is just torture

Please do continue I think it's a very god story.

Yeshi!
=D
Cute little one shot. =D
Really it was a cute one. =D I loved it,
even though I would have loved PeterxSusan ending a bit more. bBut still loved it anyway. =D
Your an amazingly talented writer. =D
ily.
xx hx

i loved it!

please write more!

sweet, very intresting...:D! update plz!

i luff it!!

oh pls pls pls continue! i'm getting ecited here u know...

pls update soon!

this story is absolutely amazing...

I actually find the idea cute. I really like Peter getting riled up over Susan's suitors and I'm pretty sure he would have something to say about Caspian, being his rival. If you like a story about the trouble with Peter and Susan's suitors, I'd recommend you read "Suitor" by Capegio which is also found on this site.

Wow, this has a nice plot to it. Caspian was a little too OOC, but other than that, great job. I want to point out, though, that sometimes you forget to put a period after the sentence. It's pretty confusing. Wonderful story, update soon!

heehee =D