I just read this in half an hour, and all I have to say is this: UPDATES ARE REQUIRED!

This story has been idle for nearly three and a half years, judging by the most recent update.

What's up with that?

-Maelstrom

Oh my FREAKING Gosh. By far the best pokemon story lve read. Keep it up!

Wow! What an incredible scene! I loved the way you used all the elements in the enviroment, like the Spearow flock, the pool of water. You just used everything you could possibly think of that was in that garden!

How do you plan out your fight scenes? Do you think of them in your head as a movie first and then describe the action that happens? (I do that!) Because that was so movie exellence like! Simply imaginative to the max!

I cringed when Esteban kneed the Blaziken in the royal jewels! That was quite un-lawful of Esteban, I feel so bad for the Blaziken,(Having a stong feeling it is a male, as it seemed to be in pain!) well, it is one of my bestest favourites afterall! How would you like it if one of yours got galloped in the ching-chungs? Dont worry, not having a go at ya. Just showing ya what i feel.

The way you described the section when Esteban and Una both gazed into each others souls, was just superbly written. I like the way we saw Uma's feelings inside, showing that there is more to her than meets the eye. And perhaps a hidden backstory about her mother, I wonder if it involved Uma, a gun, and her mother? We saw one of her 'personalities' drop the gun when Esteban was looking into her soul, as if she had done something wrong, perhaps an accidental senario happend? And what did Uma see in Esteban? What made her so scared? Ill find out soon i hope...

Also, the way you described Esteban's feelings (while in the Soul Dew would it be?) gave me the exact feeling i think i would feel in that situation. The way you write gives me such inspiration for my story. I hope you don't mind me using small glimpses in your style, not what you have written per-say. Just the way you describe things and the layout of it. It's just so inspiring.

Ok, i think i've been writing too much again, sorry. I just like saying alot of things.

Be reading the other chapters very soon!

Take care man.

RandomRooster, Clucking out.

This is awesome. I pray that you never have writer's block.

I like the story. considering you said you had the prequel finished, I won't read it till it's been posted. 13/10. faved & alerted

Cool Fanfic

Yay! Esteban and Una are back! I actually forgot how good this story was during your absence, thanks for reminding me!

Overall, there weren't really any mistakes I could find in either Chapter 8 or 9. Both were very well made, congrats!

Oy...now things are complicated for poor Una...I'm already not liking Tetra and she hasn't been around for that long.

I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter, no matter how long it takes! Keep up the good work!

With Respect,

darkblur

I think you described the Aura thing extremely well, more than i could muster, now im wishing i had that much detail in mine, oh woahers me!

Your style of writing is supremely top notch, i cant stress how amazing you really are, seriously! The characters, tghe speeches, the descriptions, its just magical.

Trust me, you have got me hooked, please continue!

Thanks!

RandomRooster, Clucking out.

DUDE! My name is Ross! Thats so cool.

Anyway, sorry, I'll carry on...

Hey, RandomRooster here. Told you id start reading your story!

Exellent, instantly captured into the situation, and very addictive. Whats happening next? AH!

I like the name Esteban, wonder where you got the inspiration for that name, suits him very well. Plus the staff and gloves are a good idea, cant wait to see what he can do with them. Wonder if we'll get a chance to find out how he was chosen to use Aura? Or if it was accidental? (Shakes hands with anticipation) HEE! HEE! Cant wait!

Well, ill read on now, ill review again on the latest chapter so you wont get so many from me, cos you know, nobody wants an annoying chicken following them all the time. Or do you?

Anyway, awsome intro, cant wait to follow it on. Keep at it!

RandomRooster, Clucking out.

plz plz plz plz plz write more!

It's nice to see you upload your next chapter!

I liked the part when Ross asked Esteban what happened, Relationship issues, Ha!

I'll review on the next chapter!

Your Brother in Arms,

CJ FANG

Very nice-ah. Good action scenes, and the characters are portrayed very nice-ah.

Well, I have to say that was pretty action packed!

I have to laugh at the part where Esteban get's shot though, I'm suprised that a 21 year old doesn't swear a ton and says Crap and Fudge! You rated this thing Teen right? Make good use of it.

Oh, I'd hate to be Una's Blaziken, last time something happened to my jewels, I barfed...

The soulgaze is pretty unique, looking into someone's history, and what true secret that Latios and Latias didn't know?

I swear, you HAVE to continue, I'm pulled in!

Now, to get some sleep, it's five in the morning...

Your Brother in Arms,

CJ FANG

Ah damn, I forgot to review!

Alright, let's start.

Your story is really fun to read, You use your content really great with aura, I actually never read an Altomare story with aura before, that's what makes this story so unique.

Now, time to review the next chapter!

Your Brother in Arms,

CJ FANG