Hey, I would have liked to see that as an episode. Not too often that Ducky or Palmer get the main billing and this was a nice little adventure that they found themselves in. Very lucky that the warning shot at Palmer through the van's window didn't end the story then and there.

OMG. I started reading this and was like, "Oh, a nice little casefile." And then the end of this chapter came and I was all :O, totally shocked. Awesome job, my dear.)

Yay! A Happy ending!
I love how well written these chapter have been... You truly are a brilliant author!

Ah a wonderful ending, loved Palmer there)

Another great chapter and another cliffhanger! :D

Yay! Another chappie!
Oh, cliffhanger...

*Sigh of relief* Very interesting at the end there, looking foward to more)

Good, keep writing!

This story is really tense... I can't wait until the next chapter!

Ah! Leave us all hanging! Very suspense filled chapter, please update soon)

Ah don't leave it there! How has this not got thousands of reviews! Damn you ! I have to go to bed now but I will watch for updates Good one Emy!

AHA!

More please.

oh, very nice, Jimmy and Ducky in danger, I like it!

OMG! That's really good, what happens next?

Oh very good, intriguing indeed! I shall look forward to more soon :D