Nati 2008-06-28 . chapter 1 This was AMAZING. Thank you for writing such a lovely fic and making my day. I loved it. |
Megsy42 2008-05-29 . chapter 1Aww, that was so sweet! I love how you can see a four-year-old Ginny transform into a 20-year-old, still standing in the same spot in the snow - great imagery. Good job! :) |
armywife012205 2008-05-26 . chapter 1That was too cute! |
gryffindorpride1007 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Loved the story. |
LilithL2 2008-05-26 . chapter 1beautiful, it's soo sweet, soo hard at the same time, but I want to congratulate you because I was seeing them, there, in the snow, soo close one of the another, and with that look in their eyes that says all that has to be said, that they are in love and nobody can broke that apart. Congratulations.
:) 8sorry for my english!) |
Kore-of-Myth 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Oh I loved this! This was beautiful - you wrote these characters amazingly well.
May I suggest something though - you say that Ginny is 20, and she is a mirror to her 4 year old self. A few lines later you write that fourteen years changed little. A slight mistake there...
Good work! Keep Writing! |
Elledreamer 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Oh yay! That was so good and so sweet. It was just lovely. I absolutely loved how you portrayed Ginny, it just seemed so perfect and I loved the image of the snow... really really great!
Elle x |
stefanie51 2008-05-26 . chapter 1i like the ending it so sweet!:) |