It was a nice story...
I can see why you chose this ending; wise choice in my opinion.
It became something of a signature this thing for DC. You know, like when running behind something to get it and just when you have your hands around it and starting to close them it disappears once again... (So close yet so far)

kyaa! that was really cute and creative, I love the kiss and the end is really sweet (shinichis letter was super cute too XD) this fic really make my day so Thanx a lot! keep the excelent work!

Nice story, love the first kiss part

XDD LOVE it!! It was really good :D

But why did Haibara call Shinichi baby..? O.O XD

Anyway, write more fics! :)

um...maybe should have been rating M? not that safe to let 13 year old teens read you know. nicely written though well done

Question: Why did Haibara call Shinichi 'Baby'?

Very nice.

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Don't you hate when you want to give a good review, but you have no idea what to say?

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It was really good...
(I was reading this while listening to 'Apologize' from OneRepublic. I think it was a good background music choice ^.^)

aw! It's a cute story, I like it. Strings you right along, and it's well written too. You did a really good job writing this!

~Topazled Hannah-kun