I would just like to say that no matter how interestingly gruesome this story was...it was really good. I actually stumbled upon the sequel first but the first chapter didn't make very much sense...and then I found this one. I like this story a lot. Most people wouldn't want to put a character through what you did. It was weird, but good job.

-Jeisa-

love it!XD

heyy. loved it

I did enjoy the crying rocks. It made me laugh so hard.
And Draco's OOC-ness also made me laugh.

This is an amazing story.
Ginny and Draco's feelings and hormones are so beautifully described, which sounds awkward, but wow. You did a fantastic job with them.

Doing a re-read and I have enjoyed the story so far

Oy. I really enjoyed this story up until the Ginny-being-tortured-and-Draco-not-being-there-for-her thing. I really wish that I could say that this was a great story, because it was before that part. But how it all ended... I really didn't like it. In fact, I hated it. How horrible!

If this story were based in the real world, I'd have to say that Draco's a psychopath. Enjoying torture and killing... It's only humanly possible in psychopaths.

Good. She's better off dead.

Ginny should have bashed her own skull in. Being dead is better than what she was being put through. I don't understand how Draco let her be tortured at all, let alone let things reach this point. What is he thinking?

Did you purposely have Draco and Warrington grab Ginny around the neck in the same chapter to contrast their intentions? There's definitely more excitement than fear when Draco does it, but when I think about it, if ANY guy ever did that to make, I'd break his arm. (There's a really simple self-defense move you can use to do that.)

ok so i just finished readig ur whole story. I really enjoyed it. Sometimes its nice to read a story without a perfect ending. u did a great job.lol loved it. but i do encourage a sequel.lol

Oh my God! I loved it!

However, I couldn't STAND 25-30. I had to skim them because they made me queasy.

The ending made me sad. But I liked the last little bit. The part where Reilly and Draco met.

Keep it up.

--Ella

How DARE you end it like that! :D Shame on you! To end such a wonderful masterpiece... so realistically... *shakes head sadly* M.

I don't want it to end!

*whimpers* This is too good. Too good. I'm going to have a heart failure and die from all of this stress.

:D