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LP-TrueLoveAlways1137
2008-08-21
ch 5,
abuseOmg This is amazing! I love Leyton. I want to know what happens when they get back home update soon please!
Leyton-equals-TrueLoveAlway...
2008-06-29
ch 5,
abusei love cheesy lp. they rock lol
havefaithrestart.
2008-06-22
ch 5,
abuseAhh, amazing chapter, for suree.

Brooke is nosy. lol.

I don't know any amazing romantic songs, LOLL. Hopefully you can think of somee. I nee a CH6!
brucas224
2008-06-22
ch 5,
abuselove it more add brucas too! and naley!
the-irish-redhead
2008-06-21
ch 5,
abuseAww Lucas is a romantic who'd have thought..
I laughed out loud at their conversations with Brooke, the way she changes it from doing a Lucas to doing a Peyton is just... Pure Brooke.
Awesome chapter! Loved it!
Mels175
2008-06-21
ch 5,
abuseGreat chapter! Update soon.
SocietyGirl
2008-06-21
ch 5,
abuseI think this is an excellent direction in your story line. I would include at least one older song. I always think of "Your All I Need To Get By", which was recorded by Marvin Gaye and Tami Tarrell. It is a nice song for a couple that is trying to start again on a positive note.

You're All I Need To Get By
(Nickolas Ashford/Valerie Simpson)
Like the sweet morning dew, I took one look at you,
And it was plain to see, you were my destiny.
With my arms open wide,
I threw away my pride
I'll sacrifice for you
Dedicate my life for you
I will go where you lead
Always there in time of need
And when I lose my will
You'll be there to push me up the hill
There's no, no looking back for us
We got love sure 'nough, that's enough
You're all, You're All I need to get by.
I all, you're all I want to strive for and do a little more
All, all the joys under the sun wrapped up into one
You're all, You're all I need to get by.

You're all I need to get by.
Like an eagle protects his nest, for you I'll do my best,
Stand by you like a tree, dare anybody to try and move me
Darling in you I found
Strength where I was torn down
Don't know what's in store but together we can open any door
Just to do what's good for you and inspire you a little higher
I know you can make a man out of a soul that didn't have a goal
Cause we, we got the right foundation and with love and determination
You're all, You're All I need to get by.
I all, you're all I want to strive for and do a little more
All, all the joys under the sun wrapped up into one
You're all, You're all I need to get by.


Good luck, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
lukenpeyton4ever
2008-06-21
ch 5,
abusei loved it, can't wait to read more. i can't wait for the gang back in th to figure it out, especially brooke. this is just so cute and so leyton love. update soon
Jessica
2008-06-20
ch 4, anon.
abuseHey! great story! r u gonna finish it? I so wanna know more!
the-irish-redhead
2008-06-19
ch 4,
abuseSeriously?! Dude! This is awesome! I'm basically in love with this story! Glad to see some doubt from Peyton, makes it a lot more realistic! And as for the whole Brooke story-line, well that just rocks! Lucas +Lindsey + friendship= amazing! Everyone wins! Leyton should go and have some fun in vegas, they deserve it!
As I'm pretty sure I've conveyed I love this story and this chapter, please please please keep up the good work!
Leyton-equals-TrueLoveAlway...
2008-06-04
ch 4,
abuseawe i hope they wait a while to get married and just have some fun in vegas
MissAttentionSpan
2008-06-03
ch 4,
abuseI understand that you can choose how you want to write your story, but Peyton and Derek being full siblings is a bit far-fetched. They shared a white father, while Peyton had Ellie as her mom, and Derek had a black mother. I'm not trying to tell you what to do, but logically, since Derek is half-black, he couldn't be anything but Peyton's half brother.
lukenpeyton4ever
2008-06-03
ch 4,
abuseno, no, no they have to get married because i think it would be awesome to see the reaction of the rest of the gang. they need to quit thinking with their heads and start thinking with their hearts. update soon.
brucas224
2008-06-03
ch 4,
abuselove it more more and add brucas too and more of the gang love it update soon!
tvnut luvs daleks
2008-06-03
ch 4,
abuseaw! poor luke!
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