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| HarryHermione3 2008-06-19 ch 2, | abusePretty good, if you don't mind me saying, you spelled a few things wrong. I would like to see the rest..no i'd love to! |
| The-Quoi 2008-06-14 ch 2, | abuseGood job maddy! ^ ^ There were a few sentaces that were a little run-on, but good job all the same. |
| HarryHermione3 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseOk, where do I start considering I have never watched Sin City... It was prety good, I look forward to reading further chapters. Read mine please! ~~Michaela~~ |
| Akenaten 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI especially liked the way you've gotten into Marv's head. You've done it so well, the words are exactly what he would say. I've got a soft spot for the big lug too...:-) Linda |
| The-Quoi 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job, maddy! ^ ^ Update soon! |