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Reviews For: Sin City: On The Run

HarryHermione3
2008-06-19
ch 2,
abusePretty good, if you don't mind me saying, you spelled a few things wrong. I would like to see the rest..no i'd love to!
The-Quoi
2008-06-14
ch 2,
abuseGood job maddy! ^ ^ There were a few sentaces that were a little run-on, but good job all the same.
HarryHermione3
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseOk, where do I start considering I have never watched Sin City... It was prety good, I look forward to reading further chapters. Read mine please!
~~Michaela~~
Akenaten
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseI especially liked the way you've gotten into Marv's head. You've done it so well, the words are exactly what he would say.

I've got a soft spot for the big lug too...:-)

Linda
The-Quoi
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseAwesome job, maddy! ^ ^
Update soon!
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