LOL i just looked at my review and i made a mistake when telling you about your mistakes XD sorry

nice story i guess, i like the idea of seph being reincarnated in a different body...but WAYY too many spelling and grammer mistakes...your might want to fix those, otherwise keep it up

Hm... is "Jessica" the young rebel who died in Sector Seven (Muahahaha Jessie rules!)? Or is she someone else, a fan character? Woah... Makes you think. Sad chapter! :(

:: jaw drops and she stars at the page with happy eyes::

I SO TOTALLY LOVED IT! IT'S SO COOL! :: eyes grow big:: Need... more...

PLEASE WRITE MORE! It's so totally COOL! PLEASE!