Oh my gosh This story was so cute!
I luved it and can definately
tell you put a lot of work in to it.
:))

this was the best story ever, I swear I was laughing so hard I almost fell off the chair. great story.

LOL what a leap to a conclusion but how Mai!!

WOWOWOWOWOW! Best fanfic in the whole section! You had all
of the characters personalities down to memory, and I could visualize every scene as I read through it. This would have made a very hillarious bonus episode.
Omedetoo! Top notch!

OH GOD. NARU'S A VAMPIRE. XD
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But then--that was probably just the trick of the light, right?
Yeah... probably.
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That was EPIC. XD
Naru also mentioned earlier that they were doing it all wrong or something right? XD
Ah that was awesome. Nice writing. ~
-T/M

Haha that was hilarious! (: If Bou-san and the rest hadn't interrupted, that would've been a perfect kiss! XD

Awesome oneshot!

Kitsune-chan *_*

that was definitely funny and very interesting,.,. :D
woohoo! ;)
go Mai and Naru! :)

i absolutely loved it! i was cracking up so much!! especially the part...OUT DEMON! THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELLS YOU! hahhahahaha

hey
im me
k?
im on

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at this point I have run out of words to describe this story.
I think its better without that red eyes bit. kinda spoils it. but funny nonetheless

I Laughed Through The Whole Thing! Nya! :3

Well I know this guy who looks, acts like and dresses like naru except the guy i know has brown eyes. well at one point we thought he could be a vampire (jokingly of course) so this made me laugh. good story though!

man that was really good. i was almost having a fit.. lol, it was so freakin funny. good job, thanks 4 sharing, i think i'm going to go read the other one's your stories r awesome.. well the 1s i read so far.

That was funny, I found the last part with the eyes a bit over the top, but it wasn't bad. Have fun with exams :)

WHOOTS!~
Funny one-shot! ^_^

and yes, i also had a hard time writing one-shots as people kept bugging me T-T