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| ADAM122343 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abusei love this, this is original ideas at there best, i am really looking forward to the next part of the story. I have a few ideas you can use: 1) the boy could know about the affair and tells his ill mum just as she wakes up from her coma 2) she will pull through and Neil will tell her 3) and i know this sounds really weird and sick but neil could pull the plug on the life support I hope you continue writing fan-fiction , Adam |
| Loz06 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseTaster eh? Well.. please ma'am can we have some more? Lauren |
| Gem6 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWell I'll still be here waiting for the inspiration to strike you :-) I really liked this, am not sure about Pippa dying though, maybe I just prefer Neil to be sneaking around behind her back though Gem x |