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godsdaughter77
2008-06-15 . chapter 8
Okay, first of all, THANK YOU for giving me the link. I absolutely loved both of her stories, and obviously your awesome story made a lot more sense after reading them.
There are so many things in your story that I absolutely loved. So, I know there will be many things I will be leaving out. However, I few of the thinks I enjoyed were the ways you showed Brenan's insecurities, his dad coming to see him, him actually getting to go on a vacation, the way everyone else at the company was worried about him, and mentioning Bill Cosby with the jello ;D. Okay, as I said that is leaving many things I liked out, but you get the idea. YOUR STORY WAS GREAT. Thanks for writing it.
godsdaughter77
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Okay, I haven't read the chapter yet(though I really want to)because I want to read Stealth Dragon's story first, but every time I try to find the story on livejournal I can't find it. (Livejournal confuses me:( ), so I was wondering if you could send me a link? Thank you so much for all your replies and your awesome stories.
Delka
2008-06-04 . chapter 8
Yes, I did enjoy. Thanks again.
Jammeke
2008-06-02 . chapter 8
Aww, I liked the ending. It was nice to bring Brendan's dad in and I found your explanation about why Brendan doesn't mantion his sicknesses very good. I am looking forward to more of your work!!
CoolBreeze1
2008-06-02 . chapter 8
Excellent! Great wrap up to a wonderful story. Thanks for posting!
mavzus
2008-06-02 . chapter 8
This was great. I've never seen the show but you've managed to introduce me to the characters and the premise really well at the same time as writing a fantastic plot!
Space1Traveler
2008-06-02 . chapter 8
Ah man, this was good, no great!

I loved every chapter and every line.

Happy endngs make me smile.

Thank you for sharing this with me. Great job, great story, greatastic!
faldo
2008-06-02 . chapter 8
Thanks for the last instalment. Enjoyed the whole fir - and working my way through lots of the stories on there (including yours!) thanks again.
Delka
2008-06-02 . chapter 7
2 poison. Different take on that angle. But works. I'm a happy reader. Keep up the good work. And awaiting anything else you might be working on. hint, hint. ;)
Jammeke
2008-06-02 . chapter 7
Aw, Brendan's freak-out was horrible. Beautifully written, but horrible... I tried looking for Stealth Dragon's fic, but I can't seem to find it on FF. Your story explains a lot, though- so I don't feel like I should have read that one first.
I like how Freya immitated Brendan by not taking care of herself due to sitting at his bedside for three days. He is rubbing off on her, it seems.
Looking forward to more!
Delka
2008-06-02 . chapter 6
Nice touch with the new neighbor being the "cause".
faldo
2008-06-01 . chapter 7
At least they're laughing a at last. Enjoying this fic - thanks. I haven't managed to find Kriadydragon's fic - but this reads well on it's own. Thanks.
CoolBreeze1
2008-06-01 . chapter 7
I knew that Mrs. McCracken was up to no good! Glad they caught her. Another great chapter!
Jammeke
2008-06-01 . chapter 6
I was thinking how long it's been since I've read one of your SGA-stories, so I decided to check out your profile and... I found this!! :) I love this story, what with Brendan being ill and Freya taking care of him. Things are really starting to come together now and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter!!
klingbohne
2008-06-01 . chapter 6
Great Story. I only stumbled over the movie after seeing that there was a fanfiction-story.
Now you guys keep it alive. Great job.
I'm a lousy reviewer but I always reed your stuff. Thank god you don't keep us hanging and post regularly.
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