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| rebeldivaluv 2008-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseSQUEE! That one's just happy, isn't it? It's left me sitting here with the biggest smile on my face, which is nice, as MOPP is on my top ten list of favorite episodes ever. That moment is so squee-inducing anyway, and the addition you made to it just put it over the top. I love InDenial!Hyde, and how obvious he is. Also, loved the line about making things worse if he punch the officer. Hee. So Hyde. |
| operacynic 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, absolutely brilliant. |
| hondagirl 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Love how integrated Jackie's lines into the story here. You managed to jep Hyde in character here too. And the cop was actually pretty funny. All in all, great job. :) |
| kayjay 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat little fic! I guess the cop was as intuitive as Kitty. a nice little look into Hyde's mind. |
| verdebel 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was really nice, super cute =D Loved it! |
| oversizedchanel 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI love it!! It's really cute, I love the way it was written! |