Oh my gosh! That is so sweet. Your words were chosen perfectly. Perhaps you should write something similar to this, only with Susan's thoughts. Bravo!

loved it.

this was good! real good.

that all there is to say.

Hey!

I have seen the film twice and I passed you some details but I really love the couple Susan/Caspian! And, after seeing the end of the movie, I have looked for fanfictions about them... but, in french (because I'm french XD) there aren't enought!!
So I started to read fanfictions in english like yours and I must tell you... I love your fanfictions : Changing_Destiny or Hearing_the_Call... they are so cute and wonderful... and I can understand almost all (?) that you have written!

About Changing_Destiny, maybe I will let you a review when you post another chapter but I really love this story... it's so cute and the last chapter is very funny!!

Well... forgive me for my bad english... I try to improve it reading fanfictions in english!!

See you soon and all the best!!
Hell.

I loved it

Well done.

i liked it! write more! SUSPIAN ROCKS!

"High King Peter seemed to be around his age of 17, King Peter looked to be about 14 and young Queen Lucy couldn't have been no older than 12."

Nicely written. Y'may wanna check that sentence first, though.=)

Aw, that was so very sweet! I must admit, I wish the movie had delved into their relationship a bit more such as you have done, but I doubt they would have done it as well as you have anyway, so its okay! Hee hee! Fantastic job, my friend!

THE HOPPING ON THE HORSE PART REMINDED ME OF "ENCHANTEDS TRUE LOVES KISS" SONG LOL

Aww, so beautiful. Go SusPian, FTW!

I love it, wonderfully written. Great job, keep it up!

It was nice to read about this from Caspian's point of view. Good job!

This was a lovely one-shot, though it would have been great if it developed into a fanfic. Not many people come up with great fanfics about Caspian and Susan even in alternative-universe.

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aww..that was so sweet! love love love!