that was great

that is so so CUTE! maybe you should write a ff to go with this! seems really good! I loved it :)

the song is good!

Oh WOW! That was nothing short of A-MAZ-ING!
It was so cute! And SOO DIFFRENT! I LOVED how you used Mia to convey the story of Tommy and Jude. Very well done! The ending was uber sweet!

I loved it.
Ekk if this is what u are like when you have finals on.. you should have them more regually! LOL joking.. Finals are fun for no one! But good luck with them

Cute, very cute. I love it! There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but otherwise, no. Great work Rin.

-Zan