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Azalee
2008-07-31 . chapter 6
I quite like those new ones :D The Kou x Ryou was just too incredibly cute, what with all the stuff he lists ("the way you pretend to hate the fact that I'm taller than you", hee~) ; and I just adored the 5th one, I like a lot everyone commenting on Kousuke's growing up :)
xaki
2008-07-18 . chapter 2
I read all the ones that you've updated, and I think the one piece that stands out particular and does it for me is the one about Kanone. It's lovely and so full of hearts. I think you're the best when it comes to write about melancholy. You describe the feelings perfectly, and it doesn't need to have fancy words or pretty sentences. Just simple words, simple descriptions, and that's enough to tuck at people's heart.
Azalee
2008-05-27 . chapter 3
These are wonderful. I had read them the first time you'd posted and was really upset when I thought you'd abandoned that project, since this list of prompts is beautiful. I was glad to read the first two again, and that third one... I'm honestly tearing up. It's... quiet and so sorrowful, I love how they all react — crap, I'm really going to cry. Beautiful :') Kanone's mourning is great and endless inspiration, isn't it ?
Waiting to see more of this series :)
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