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Reviews for: Whisper in the Wind
AnimelovinKiDD
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
Very Very touching!I almost cried when reading this. It's great how you made it so that Light does feel some sense of regret and sadness for killing him.And its amazing how you put the saying that L said to him about being his friend!Overall a good piece of work!!


-AnimelovinKiDD
creepingshadow
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
Touching, simply touching.
greendayluvr93
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
This brought me within a quarter of an inch of tears. It is beautifully written and has just right amount of emoiton. I'll definately read another on eof your stories.
C Elise
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
very great fic!!
RawrItsJessica
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
i love it.
is so sad!
i really love it!!
Aki WildQueen
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Oh! Death Note fanfic! I like it a lot!
Mr. Bunny and I love your stories and are begging you to update your other fics. (Particularly Darkly Treacherous.) PLEASE!
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Kuzosama
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
:o ohh. Wow.
Mischievious Marauder
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Loved it, simple and touching. I really think a scene like this would fit in perfectly in the actual story. You did a great job adding another dimension to Light's character and portraying his love/hate relationship with L.
Khazia
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
I like this very much. It shows the human side of Light Yagami, and that despite his methods, he started being Kira because he believed he could make the world a better place. And he did seem kinda...disappointed when L died...

Wonderful work.
Quillian
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Wow, this was certainly different. (I saw a clip of the "Death Note Rewrite", where Light gloats over L's grave and acts almost psychotic.) Good work!
Hattaguchi S.
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Not how I'd interpret Light, but you justified it with a very enjoyable writing style.

Very nice work, you managed to abvoid too much overblown angstyness, and yet managed to make it sufficiently emotional.

Excellent.
Xenia Marvolo
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Oh, yes1 I can perfectly see that it should have been exactly like this!

Great story!
Burnout Wolf
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
This is a great fic. Strong but deep. I can imgaine this scene in the actual manga/anime. Good work. You did well on doing Kira's perspective in the whole L/Light war.
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