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| acacia59601 2008-07-23 ch 2,  | abuseThis is a really interesting story, I'm looking forward to seeing the sequel! |
| creative-writing-girl13 2008-06-09 ch 2, | abuseW-O-W! This is really good and you should defiently write a squeal! You have an amazing talent for writing! Keep it up! |
| Broken Gold 2008-06-09 ch 2, | abuseWell done. |
| Adrianerose 2008-06-07 ch 2, | abuseMORE PLEASE! LOL, I like your story so far I want to see how you develope it, things look like they are going to get interesting. |
| Katty008 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abuseEXACTLY! You need to write the Dawn Treader where their kid(s) somehow sneak aboard! |
| hotarusgirlforever 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abuseOMG!! I luv the story! I cant wait till the next chapter u are doing a great job! |
| Tsunay Nami 2008-06-02 ch 2, | abusewoww.. so cute!! *-* Love it! Kisses.. |
| nicole weasley granger 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseThat was great, it made me cry. |
| phoemae101 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseYay, sequel! Ok, that's kind of gross,but hilarious (entering the room with Caspian and Susan), i was literally rolling on the floor at that bit. i like how you made Aslan tell Lucy the future, nice chapter! |
| Blackeri 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseFour hours of searching and I finally found a fic that does justice to Susan and Caspian. I'll admit it, I cried at the end of PC. Unrequitted love is the saddest of things. That being said, you've done a pretty good job of making this a happy (believable) ending. Personally, I love the way you've characterized Susan and Caspian. They always did seem mature for their age and I loved that. Can't wait for more about these two! |
| GilbertDrone328 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseGood story! |
| chnoelle 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuse:D I love this story. |
| -xAxsxHxlxExyx- 2008-05-30 ch 2, | abuseit was really good |
| mae-E 2008-05-29 ch 2, | abusethis is a good chatper! So lucy gets to say good-bye that's good. I look foward to seeing the sequel. And I do hope that you have the time this summer to write out the rest of their days. i think you would do well. |
| Sarry 2008-05-29 ch 2, | abuseamazing! continue please |