Very nicely written plot and well executed.

The only thing I'm seeing is that you have the same 'tag' problem that I had (sometimes still 'have')

I'm sure one of the others in Ghost Writer's United can explain it better.

sorry I didn't review the last chapter ^^;
it just wouldn't work *pout*
oh well, nice chappies here!
now we know why starscream got rid of megatron ^^

Hum. Now Starscream know the truth... Please update soon!

Their playing is cute..hehe. I don't see TF:A until now, so I don't know why Starscream give Megatron a send-off purposely. I just guess Starscream attach something like post-it reads so 'Hit me' or 'I'm fool' to Megatron's back.

The part that Black Arachnia references is an actuator. An actuator is a mechanical device for moving or controlling a mechanism or system. I think they were just going with something that sounds technical but doesn't really have a practical way of accomplishing what she's suggesting.

I know what this is. it's the first episode of transformers aniamted. Transform and Roll Out.

this was good! I know what Starscream did when he pat Megatron on the back! hehe. Keep it up!

aw you made megatron raise starscream! how cute!
wonder how the flight will be
and what did they talked about in the last chapter?

Megatron raised him? With the way their relationship is turning out, that's kind of creepy.

it was good =) Keep it up

I like this story, so cute Megatron raising Starscream, update when you can. :)

Yipee! Flying couple! Will they do 'Catch me if you can' play?

still good, what did lugnut thought about? mh, update soon for us to find out!

I now find LugnutxBlitzwing kind of icky. Don't really want to imagine them like that. Besides that, I enjoyed the MxSS interaction.

why don't you trust beta's? and this was very good! can't wait for 4. poor Blackarachnia though =(

Well, Lugnut seems smarter than original..not so bad. Keep going!