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| Lerryn 2008-09-05 ch 1,  | abuseYay! An army of Pudding's now the world will be a better place :D x |
| XxxDeathStarxxX 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was just to creep! OMG! KISH MAKING OUT WITH HIMSELF! I like the part were Pudding's like "yay my birthday wish came true!" My neice had a story about Pudding finding a clone machine and she took over the world with chibis of her! 0_0 Go chibi wave! |
| ILoveDeepBlue95 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuse? Okay Kisshu's was... WOW! CREEPY! And an army of Puddings is cools! |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuse*cracks up laughing* Actually, this is really good! I wasn't quite sure what to expect, but this is great! *grin* Nice one! |
| The Silver Huntress 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseSQUE! *GLOMP* awesome story. OMG, an army of puddings. THE WORLD IS DOOMED! |
| Pig-sama 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseCybil~ Wowie. THat was actually much better than it looked! “Nothing, I just thought they would make it look more scientific” That's classic comedy for you right there; the best kind there is. It's the best FanFictions that have a serious outlook, but have hilarious moments inside, not the scripted game-show, truth-or-dare stff you see these days. This is a good example of the first one. It had a few grammtical errors, I'll admit, but I enjoyed it overall. Cheers, love. ~P. |
| Saba Butt 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I was almost finished typing up all the mistakes you needed to correct but I deleted it all thinking about all the space I'm wasting when I've actually got a lot to say about your story... Pai is so evil! How could he make such a contraption? And worse, he cloned our one and only Kisshu and Taruto! And strange enough, my mouth actually dropped open when the image of two Kisshus kissing eachother entered my mind. You evil person! Poor Tarutos. xD I'd hate to witness a hundred Purins! And if Pai said someone had to do the controls, how did he clone himself? And I thought he hated people... He's so selfish! He loves himself! |
| mew mew lucinda 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuselol love the last line of the story And the world was soon to be overthrown by an army of Puddings LOL!! But is kish gay with himself LOL! I dunno But it is a funny story! |