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| notwritten 2008-09-02 ch 13,  | abuseVery interesting chapter today. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-08-21 ch 12, | abuseThe paragraphs are hard to read all bunched together. And when a person talks they get there own paragraph. The story is still good just hard to read. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-08-11 ch 11, | abuseEnjoyable and interesting chapter. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-) Can we have more please! |
| kaye 2008-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abusedid you by chance learn english? if you did, i understand completely, its just that your grammer wasn't the greatest. your sentences were a bit off..."That woman seems a witch when she scream like that or whatever she do." that is just one of the sentences that was a bit off. the correct way would be "that woman is a witch when she screams like that or whatever she does" at least that what i think you were trying to say. i love the way the story is going. |
| notwritten 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseI think that this chapter is interesting, and cool. Keep smiling, and try to keep cool. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-07-25 ch 9, | abuseI find this chapter to be very interesting today. Thank you for sharing. Have a energizing weekend. Keep smiling, and show your smile to others, and shine for them. :-) Can we please have more updates, so that we can continue to enjoy your story. |
| notwritten 2008-07-15 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter today. Keep smiling today. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-07-09 ch 7, | abuseI like this chapter, it was very cool. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abuseGood chapter. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling. :-) |
| saingirl101 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abuseI still can't really understand it that well but...I know ur trying hard so keep up the good work! I fyou need one i can help edit if you want me to. Its a little difficult to understand at first but I get what your trying to say. I must say though considering some writers your actually doing remarkable on this story I really enjoy it. This chapters amazing and I can't wait for the next. -sg101 |
| Wolf.at.Heart 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI have to guess that English isn't your first language. Your disclaimer kind of showed that by itself. I'll guess Spanish b/c of the question marks and 'histories,' instead of stories. This was very hard to read, try getting a beta. They will help. |
| notwritten 2008-06-23 ch 5, | abuseVery nice, and interesting. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-06-14 ch 4, | abuseThis chapter is very interesting, and very cool today. Keep smiling. :-) |
| Kelsi678 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseso it seems like u tried to write this in english, but u have a lot of errors, sometimes i do not know what you are saying |
| notwritten 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseGood, and interesting Chapter. Have a very cool, and swell weekend. Keep smiling. :-) Please do not forget to update your story, but only if your plot bunny cooperates, and gives you ideas to work with. |