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| Gijinka Renamon 2008-06-13 ch 2,  | abuseHmm...interesting concept. Please continue! |
| Count X. Gamlxltoe 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseI don't like this future... But still good job, dude. |
| sonicandlink 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseNice chapter. the story looks like it will be pretty interesting... I look forward to the next chapter... |
| Amaxing 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseA futuristic city run by evil prosecutors... now that's an idea! It's a good story so far. I liked how Apollo's first reaction is 'get the hell away from me', it's much more realistic than if he'd just accepted it off the cuff. Story seems pretty good too, though there were a few spelling/grammar errors that made me twitch. But... my 10th grade English teacher was a grammar Nazi. That's probably the only reason I noticed it. Never use 'reiterate' unless it's been repeated THREE times now, children! Etc. I'll be looking forward to the rest. -Max |
| Faermage-KH JUnkie 2008-06-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseDefinitely like his mentor. Aww, so sweet, what a cute kid. I can't wait for the next chap. |
| Shimohi Inferno Tiger 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWow! And Black Scepter has done it again. And by 'it' I mean 'started yet another interesting story'. I did read Revenant Lawyer, so I recognized the name "Leo Lionhear". Sorry I didn't leave a review for Revenant Lawyer, it's just that by the time I started reading it, it was already finished and done. Nice one with the Sci-fi angle. There's two things aside from general action/adventure and mysteries that interest me... A)Fantasy and B)Sci-Fi Then again, I do recall someone saying something to the effect of "Any suffeciently advanced techology is indistinguishable from magic". In that case, on can say that there's a fine or blury line between fantasy and sci-fi. Where one mostly deals witht the past, the other mostly deals with the future... Maybe I'm thinking about this too much. (0.0); |
| sonicandlink 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseseems... interesting... umm... dunno what else to say lol Its not a bad start, don't get me wrong... its just a bit strange lol... err... can't wait to read the rest lol... I'm more than positive that I'll end up liking it... the beginning was just a bit odd... |
| Faermage-KH Junkie 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseLEO LIONHEART? *Reads disclaimer* Oh, okay. But... still... LEO LIONHEART! Is THIS what happened to him after he died? Again? |
| LoneBusterWolf 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseLEO! LEO'S BACK! Freaking awesome! Solid prologue and story, you can count on me to read this! Mystery and awesomeness makes a happy wolf. 'til next chapter! -Wolf |
| Count X. Gamlxltoe 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseOk, this is new... but good. |