|Reviews for Without A Trace|
| alwaysateen 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Hurt!Dean from the start, I like it already. :)
Please don't hurt Bobby too badly, I really like the guy...
| ziggy.uk 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Great start to this story Michaela, and what an original one - Bobby going missing! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us readers!
As usual you had their banter to perfection -
“I thought so. Seriously, we’ve been sat here what? Two hours? I’m dying of boredom here, Sammy.”
“You know you said that after the first fifteen minutes. Look, this isn’t exactly my idea of fun either but what do you want me to do? Tell you a story?”
“Yeah, cos I’m five years old.”
“You’ve certainly got the attention span.”
Could just imagine them sat in the car for two hours thinking it was a wendigo they were waiting for!
And typical Sam feeling bad about shooting an injured bear, but it would have torn Dean to shreds had he not!
Intriguing end to this chapter - just what exactly was said on the voicemail and just how much trouble is Bobby in? Can't wait to find out!
| Nana56 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Oh, gotta save Bobby! Great start, honey, with a little hurt!Dean thrown in for good measure. That set the hook good and firmly. Love me some hurt!Dean.
I'm not a hunter on purpose. I am proficient with a pistol, a rifle and a bow-and-arrow. I'm not going to go into the pros and cons of hunting, but when someone wounds an animal and does not track it down to finish the job, It makes me furious! I'm with Dean. The shooter should suffer the same fate.
| staceycj 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Oh see now you have me interested. What in the world could have Sam that scared this side of a demon or a hell hound determined to take his brother to Hell? And what oh what could have poor Bobby hurt? You and kripke like to pick on the extra people we all like! LOL
| lunasgathering39 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Nice brotherly banter and Sammy guilt. You write Sam much better than I can. But did you have to leave it at that? Bobby's in trouble. What kind of trouble!
But seriously, nice little cliffhanger. _
| KatieMalfoy19 5/27/08 . chapter 1
Yay yay yay! Another story! Great first chapter! I can't wait for more! Please update really soon! Katie
| jenilee 5/27/08 . chapter 1
This is off to a promising start. Will this have a bit of a mystery to it like "What makes you stronger", as well?
Poor Sam, I know exactly how he feels sitting next to impatient, fidgity boy...lol.
| Samjacklover aka Sammy 5/27/08 . chapter 1
sounds good. hope to see an update soon!
| supergirl02 5/27/08 . chapter 1
oh no bobby! can't wait for more...great begining!