Aw! I loved it!

You need to work on the grammar and punctuation. There were some capitulation off as well...It was still awesome though!

AAH!! So cute, so cute!

I luvs it ^^

Awe! That's toally cute! ps: Love the pairing!

Awe!! Hiei was blushing! This was very cute! A me gusta!!

This fic was totally cute. You so don't have any oc in the characters which is awesome. I hate stories where they make Hiei look like some complete lovey idiot. You should make more little stories.