Reviews for Through the Door

Reviews For: Through the Door

bsc9999 2008-07-17 ch 1,	abusethis is a really good story, and i enjoy it. it's very well-written, and i cant find any spelling or grammatical errors. jill and eustace are very in character, and i think it's a great story of what they do between the silver chair and the last battle. really great, i would say.
EstellaB 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseExcuse me a moment whilst I sigh happily at how perfect this was. Okay, done. This story WAS perfect. I liked the very, very tiny hints of attraction between Eustace and Jill-you captured the spirit of that relationship perfectly in canon. My favourite section was- “I do think this a bit off,” Eustace mumbled, looking around—but Jill grabbed his arm and pulled him down, saying ecstatically, “Smell the roses, Scrubb! They’re ten times nicer than any that ever grew on That side of The Door!” He obeyed reluctantly, and was obliged to admit that what Jill said was true, despite that he hadn’t, he said, done much rose-smelling on his own before to measure this against. Eustace had a fresh scratch on his face from a thorn when he sat back, but oddly enough he didn’t seem to notice it much. - Ah, Eustace's reluctance to admit that he has smelt roses before, as well as his desperate attempts not to end up holding flowers. This was very much in Lewis' style. I really did love it. My only tiny bit of constructive criticism might be that the surname "Patel" isn't very 40s England-it jarred a tiny bit, but only because the rest of the fic was so perfect in every way. :D:D
Duchess Alexandra 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseYour interpretation of what happens to Eustace and Jill between The Silver Chair and The Last Battle is great. I like how you didn't make the door go into Narnia, like other authors would have, but let it still have some of Narnia's magic- everything would be lovelier on the other side of the door.

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