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| Chrononyx 2008-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseer... Oh hell with it. Nice beginning. I wonder if you will develop the romance further than a quick single chapter get together... maybe things could get a little more complex. In any case, your story is devoid of major spelling and grammar errors, so its a win-win for me. Write on. Don't abandon, and make your chapters consistent. Watching for more, Chrononyx |