Keep it. it's really good.

elvengirl10

I looove Dragonlance! If you want to talk about it, e-mail me! Write more really soon! I cannot wait!

Ummm, just an opinion, but you should read the Fifth Age books, they tell you

how Palin finds the magic and that the dragon war starts. The gods never return

Tha's why it's called "the age of mortals" duh.

It is very good. I have always wondered what happens after the heros of the lance die and the great gods return. this is my answere, but i always like the old books

Hmmmm... let us start down the list, shall we? Although yes, this IS Dragonlance related and VERY well written, you didnt flame me. HOWEVER!*points a finger at you warningly* Made-up characters are good but only for the right cause! Atleast you did not make it sound incredibly stupid from the OTHER ones I've read, UHM. You description for the story was VERY delious sounding so, I decided to payo-visit. Remember, (hense the word, remember) Although some may doubt what you do, others will NEVER doubt what you say...

I like the beginning. Please do write more.