That was amusing XD- I didn't think it would be, but it was. The cynic and romantic parts really gave it flavour- or humourlavour XD Like it, me does!

Hi Kiana!

This is Shweta, from Sydney... I was last in touch with u on msn when i was just out of high school... oh say about 5 years ago?

that was when i first started reading ur fanfics abt nightworld and especially lovedChimera... but its been so long since u last wrote and updatedur site that i was a little melancholy... why dont u publish ur fanfics? i swear i would buy them!
anyway, i LOVE this poem... it totally had me LOLíng. ;D

Its great to see u actively publishing stuf online again!

btw, ive been meaning to get into my writing which i neglectedfor about 10 yrs..., and want some advice... where do i start_? short themed stories, one a day or something?

nd how do u manage to convey so much humour in ur writing!
have always loved ur work, and will be keeping an eye on ur page..

please do look into getting published, Ki!

xox

Shweta, Sydney

Exactly how much coffe did you have?

I liked the back and forth comments between the infatuated person and the cynic in her head!

Shang Leopard

Love the cynic vs romance in this poem, made me laugh...

Cool.(at least it's better than the dumb trash they make us read at school
And if thats what coffee does to you, then I guess I should start drinking it as well.

Amazing- I love it. As a cynic, the small argument between dream and reality hit where it counts- the smile. It's rare to find a piece that causes thought and a smile, and you seem to do it often enough to make you gather hordes of very respectful fans.

Oh, that was just... perfect. Very, very amusing. Onto the favorites list it goes!

This is very funny, and reminds me a little of the ending of Chimera.

very amusing poem! keep writing!...especially some more Chimera-I'm dying of suspense!

Hay loved it. funny and its oh so true. the only perfect guys are in your head, well at lest the only perfect guys i now are fictishus. i love all yopur stuff. i read a lot on Twilight tales and now i found some more here. coolies keep riting please.

HAHAHA! That was hella funny!

that is seriously hystericly funny.

the scary thing about it is it's v. true (well the bracketed bits at least)

So true. But what's a PIN? Is it a British thing I don't know about, or am I simply ignorant?

Ha! That's perfect! Are you laughing at the hopeless throngs that adhere to their Shakespearean ideals of love- or are you laughing at yourself?

aaahhhhhhh! i love it it's so cute. just another sinic writing a review. this poem is good cos it makes your imagination act up everyones gonna picture someone different