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| Firestorm Studios 2008-09-05 ch 21,  | abuseOoh! Excellent chapter, I'm glad to see all the stories end at this point in time! A fresh start, with Lynx untrackable and the group looking for him! Can't wait for more! It's GoldenTalesGeek's birthday? Well, I don't know him, but the friend of my friend is also a friend, so wish him a happy birthday for me! Glad to see another September birth (I was born on the 16th) Anyway, you know that I eagerly for the next chapter! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-31 ch 20, | abuseWhat a stunning chapter! Dead serious, explaining the backstory while the demon is killed makes for a truly exciting chapter! Something tells me that Mantaka isn't entirely gone though, I'll have to wait and see! Really breathtaking! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-31 ch 19, | abuseOoh! A council of darkness, traitors, and sacrifice! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, I was bogged down by schoolwork. Anyway, very good chapter, and thank you so much for putting me in the story! =D Moving on the to chappy 20! |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-29 ch 20, | abuseDamn, that was an intense chapter! I still sincerely hope that Talyn isn't... :'( Keep up the brilliant work! ~ GoldenTalesGeek P.S. If you DO kill off Talyn, I'll never forgive you. Especially since we share the "rights" to him... |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-27 ch 19, | abuseBrilliant chapter! Although, I sincerely hope Talyn isn't... :'( Good luck with the next one! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-17 ch 18, | abuseAside from the redundancy in the chapter title, this one was pretty good! There's a traitor amongst them, huh? As if the entire crew had to have loyalty to the crew in the first place... lol Just teasing! I really look forward to seeing what happens next! Good luck! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-13 ch 18, | abuseAnd stories are revealed! Once again, I love the militarialistic style of this chapter, as well as backstory of the characters! It looks like Kuro is going to turn into a Heartless, and there is a traitor amongst the Gaia Military! Suspenseful, I love it! By the way, you had a character named Tom? o.O |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-04 ch 17, | abuseGreat chapter! I especially like the little reference to the old Japanese myth that if you sneeze, someone must be talking about you. It's really getting good! Can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-04 ch 17, | abuseAnother Keybearer? Another relative? SUSPENSE! Also, I loved the military style of this chapter, you're really good at it! Can't wait for more! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-04 ch 16, | abuseWow, you're really good at ship-based scenes! Also I love the line Elion gave Lynx - awesome! Onto the next chapter! |
| sarkura 2008-08-04 ch 17, anon. | abuselol this is so cool! kep wirting |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-02 ch 16, | abuseBrilliant chapter! Nice to see the dysfunction continues even on the gummi ship... :D Keep up the great work! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |
| LordShaeorisst 2008-08-02 ch 16, | abuseThe hilarity of gummy ships and the bantering of the characters caught me laughing. good job! And keep going. |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-07-26 ch 15, | abuseThis is continuing to get more and more interesting... I still wonder why Talyn's been marked for death... Good luck with the next one! ~ GoldenTalesGeek P.S. Forgive my rather rushed reviews, but I've been really busy lately, and also been really lazy when it comes to catching up on fanfiction... :P |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-07-25 ch 15, | abuseI love how deep this story is getting, especially with how well the stories compliment each other, and just how well-written it is! A great chapter and looking forward to more! |