I was so sorry to hear about your grandfather and his tragic, yet amazing coincidance. The poem was fantastic and totally something that L would pen if he could.

I'm sorry about your Grandpa, mine died the same way. Anyway, I love all the candy references.

This was absolutely beautiful, the entire time, while I read it, I thought, "Wow, this is so good. Almost too good."

After reading your A/N it makes sense, I don't mean any offense, so sorry if I did inflict any by saying that. My late condolences. Definitely favouriting, not only was it well written, I think it fits quite well with Watari and L.

I adore this. My throat got knotted up from reading this. It's so depressingly cute.

Faving!

Wow, that was awesome. Lovely poem. Now I'm teary-eyed. -sniffles-

uhh..condolence. :(( this is so sad.

I know this was posted awhile ago, but I'm leaving a review anyway. I felt like I had to. This eulogy is so emotional and intense. When I say that this is the best poem I've ever read, I'm being honest. I don't throw meaningful things like that around...only when I really mean them. This brought me to tears. I love that it evoked such powerful emotions in me. It's beautiful and inspirational. I love it. :)

Sorry for your loss, I'm sure he was a great man. I lost my own grandfather due to cancer. :< This poem expresses wonderfully and the added touch of surrealism from the candy skies and clouds made it even better. It was beautiful. ^_^ And don't you worry about ROH. We can wait a little longer. *huggles*

Oh! and BTW, before I forget, I think I spied a typo lurking in the mists,
"Which was torn, along with yours,

Is though it was designed"

I think Is was supposed to be As. ^_^

I usually don't like poetry but this was really touching.
I'm really sorry about your grandfather as well.

This was just beautiful.

I'm sorry to hear that,
I wish your grandpa will rest in peace.
I loved the poem, it sounds like L. :D

love it. the sky of blue jellybeans... so kawaii! so like L to think of heaven as place of candies and bubble gum!

also, so sorry for your grandpa...

This was so cute and so well wriiten!!

It's also very sweet and significant. I love the expression, and the words, and the imagery for heaven by L (of course to him it'd be candy-he's SO very cute).

This was pure gold. Awesome in fact. And I like that there's also a Wataru L connection in your stories. Watari was so cute and grandfatherly, and he needs love too.

Awesome work!! *favourites*

Wow, this poem is amazing, I love it!!And I'm very sorry about your Grandfather, I do hope your doing well. ^-^

Sorry for the loss.
But, it's a beautiful poem!

I'm sorry, I hope you feel better.