That was so sad. You weren't kidding when you said it was rated T. It made me cry, you are a very good writer.It was a good story.

Whoa. That's some serious dark writing there. Horror is not my cup of tea, and I don't even usually glance at it...but once I started reading I had to find out the ending.

There is something to be said for that talent. Now...I'm gonna go ball up in a corner, rock repeatedly and cry.

~Solard

Wow that was an awesome story, i would have liked to see more Dasey or something but you know what that was an awesoe story, had me guessing the whole time.

woahh.. that was really disturbingg. i loved it. yur an amazing writer. :)

This has been one of the most sick, twisted, and depressing fics that I have ever read. That being said….it was good. Disturbing, but good. You definitely had a vision for this and did not compromise one inch. I admire both your commitment and storytelling prowess. Well done. I must now go seek out some fluff for a counterbalance:)

Oh, wow, now THAT was seriously creepy. And maybe I really shouldn't have read it at night. Mostly I'm not the kind to go for mangled body parts, but it was written so well that I HAD to read it through! But the best thing was that EVERYONE died, I mean by the end even Derek was way tired and just wanted it to end. That's relatable. And then the sort-of-epilogue was very unique, loved that it was LIZZE who was finally "taking revenge" as such and Dean till the end was absolutely creepy! Fabulous story! :)

Alan is just SO awesome! And I can't help but feel sad for him, and I never thought I'd say this, since Dasey is my OTP, but I *so* want Derek and Alan to hook up at least once. It must be really hard to be in love with this guy who's straight. Not to mention that Alan is just...amazingly characterized. He's smart enough to know the game and yet in love enough to still play it. I just started reading this story today and it's reallyreally good! The tension build-up is perfect, not to mention I'm LOVING the Dasey moments and also the Alan/Derek interactions!
It's creepy in the perfect way. But I really wish the fam had been more accepting of Alan but I guess they do like to pretend to be highbrow (considering how they treated Truman, but then Truman was a slime bucket.)
" I will not, under any circumstances, allow homophobic comments to slide by without mentioning that I feel it is inappropriate."
Go you!

Wonderful update and a nice end to a wonderful story. Keep up the good work!

...Wow. That was the most horrific story I've ever read in my ENTIRE life, but in a GOOD way! It takes a special kind of person to write a story like that. Some may even say you're a little disturbed...but I like it. ;)

Interesting last chapter. I like the choppiness. It fits.

Wow. That was an interesting ending that's for sure.

Ok... Further creepy. Keep writing.

Oh. Creepy... Next chapter...

I really liked this chapter but it was too gory for me. There is something seriously wrong with that guy. I mean who would cut out someone's eyes? People in real life don't. But anyway, I enjoyed it and you are a little bit too good at details. :) That's a good thing.

Can't wait 2 read more : )