Hey Sora! Thankies 4 mentioning meh in ur chappie! *hugs u* And- I luv Tyro! *throws him a cookie* Hey! Ouch- he just lit my pants on fire! OW DAMN IT! How waz I supposed to know he doesn't like cookies?... *nurses wounds in a dark corner*

Anywwayss- poor Sora...er U! Riku waz so mean, pushing you into the sand. Guess he waz having one of those 'Im dark and myserious and sexy and u know u luv meh' moments. Lol! Im SO curious about that mark on Roxy. Can I steal it and use it for one of my stories? Bwa ha ha. (Though, seriously, I wouldn't do it without ur permission meh friend)

Have fun in North Carolina! Ud better enjoy those cool ocean waves- while me and Roxy r left to burn here in the hot sun! *groans in misery* ;3 Adios mi amiga!

Even if you weren't threatening the life of your best friend's child,lol, I would still review! :o)

Better,, I can honestly say, much better. We are getting in some characters who are building upon a problem. Roxas and SOra are having like "internal conflict" ( I liked the way you stated about them talking to one another...who wants to talk to themselves...lol)and Riku is has his own things...

Can't wait for chapter three.

Hey Hey, Bandie Geek! Bet Im the last person u thought'd review? Hm? Anyways..

YAY! Ur amazing storie is finally on the web for all 2 c! Woot woot! *punches the air* Nice... I really liked it! Though, u should have made it longer! U left me hanging- and I hate that! Yet- I love it the same time... ? Well- I hope that my tiger and r Sexy Zexy have a happy ending! *cuddles tiger*

Sincerely, kirinlover

P.S Oh look! A butterfly just crashed into my monitor and burned to a cinder. Aw. Hey- r those GREEN wings? Hope that's not ur butterfly sora! Bwa ha ha!

I like the starting of the fight scene. Then the story lost me a bit during the fights... I think I was trying to grasp what exactly was going on or who was supposed to stand out. I am anticipating who this "familiar" tiger and savior is. Good job. I hope to read more :o)