 heh three fangirls 2009-04-02 . chapter 1 please for the love of god continue! |
 alex 2009-02-07 . chapter 1 hm
interesting story
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but its not finished yet
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I hate it when authors write a story and then stop writing..when they leave it at a semi-cliffy
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it just pisses me off
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or when they just fall of the face of the Earth and dont write for like yrs.
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anyways back to ur story
its actually okay
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It started off really good...making them have to control their actions
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I could see a ItaNaruSasu
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plz write more |
 IrisUzumaki 2008-11-21 . chapter 1JA :D
continue this story please, it's so well written.
** and I'd prefer itanarusasu / **
(ahum, sorry for my bad grammar but I just can't proper English) |
 Barking Spiders 2008-07-20 . chapter 1I LOVE the ItaNaru-ness!! That last line made me squeal in excitment. This is good enough to stay as a one-shot, but it would/could be more wonderful if you had continued it! If you don't, I hope you change the status soon.
So yeah.
-Barky- |
 sulie 2008-07-16 . chapter 1I would like if you continue. The last two lines broke my heart. I was like Itachi is a good guy! and then no...
thank you! |
 DarkRavie 2008-07-15 . chapter 1ItaNaru is the best pairing! Love what you've started and I can't wait to read what happens next! |
 SiberiaFox 2008-07-14 . chapter 1You must continue this! I love how you kept describing Itachi's long hair! |
 Les 2008-07-13 . chapter 1 Keep going, one chapter's not enough :D |
 susan22 2008-06-28 . chapter 1please continue! but no ItaNaruSasu-please? |
 Vanpire 2008-06-22 . chapter 1more taht is sexy |
 Grinning Cheshire Cat 9 2008-06-14 . chapter 1more plz! im too crappy a writer to offer critism of any sort, but well written stories inspire me! plz continue |
 TheDeviant 2008-06-01 . chapter 1I am in love with this story so far, please do update soon! |
 RANDOMNATIONS 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Itasasunaru would be awesome! XD
Cool fic! |
 lunachiarolover 2008-05-29 . chapter 1totally loved it!! so would love it if you continued!! |
 Nemesis Horizon 2008-05-29 . chapter 1CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! It's VERY good! |