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Zainab
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
VERY FUNNY!
Zainab
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
I FRICKIN LOVED THIS!
dishrag-chan
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Man, this was so funny! I'm really liking this pairing.
Cherry-Starburst
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
Haha love it! Oh poor oblivious Ichigo, how you make me laugh :)
Requisite
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Ahah, that is adorable!

Poor Shinji. Poor Orihime. Actually, poor Kiego.

I noticed a couple places where you could have used a little bit more description or rephrased a bit, but otherwise it was really nice - no grammatical mistakes (that I saw, at least), and everything sparkled. (You don't see much of that anymore. =\)

Anyways, thank you for the read!

- Requisite
Envy is broken
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Omg that was soo funny! I love it, especially the end and Shinji's attempts at Ichigo, they were so cute and adorbale but so funny at the same time. Loved it!
princespeach
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
LOLS. This was hilarious. Don't give up, Shinji! He want's you, he just doesn't know it yet!

...anyway. Seriously amusing fic. Nice job!
lotus-bugxm9
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Lol!!:S I have found myself latly attracted to this cracky couple and for good reason as they would be very intresting together not to mention hot and funny as hell!! Loved it.
queenxelizabeth
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Oh, Ichi. Always so oblivious. I love the way you wrote him, btw.
Look-On-The-Dark-Side-Of-Life
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
I think I busted a lung! That was hilarious!
xXKimochiWatariXx
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
"Gay. Homosexual. Out of the closet. Dropping the soap. Rainbows and unicorns. Skittles." OMG! My fav line!! XD

Poor poor Shinji. Fuck, Ichigo's so dense! XD Oh well, Shinji can get into his pants anyday. :) This was great!

~KW
Wasabikitty10
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
I laughed my ass off. That was fabulous. I mean, SERIOUSLY fabulous. I'm glad I'm not the only one who noticed Shinji totally hitting on Ichigo.

--WK
Black-Rose23
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Haha! Ichigo truly is oblivious. At least Orihime can share in Shinji's pain, as Ichigo is also oblivious to her.
Eternal Dumas
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Shinji is so highly amusing when he's trying to hit on Ichigo. xD This story made me giggle, though I'm a little bit irked that the wrong honorifics were used (sorry, I'm really big on honorifics *sweatdrops).
Zasik
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! you have a gift for this! Hold up the good work :D
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