 Diclonious57 2009-10-27 . chapter 11It felt like that little boy high from the dentist gas on youtube. |
 Diclonious57 2009-10-27 . chapter 6so many crossovers! I did not see rinoa coming.Squall get your act in gear and buy a ring |
 Niroy 2009-07-12 . chapter 21 ...I just read that all in one sitting.
Reading the last few chapers HURT.
** you, I'm not going to be able to sleep tonight now.
Nah kidding, i thought the writing was great. |
 Val56710 2009-06-29 . chapter 21Wow, each chapter was just...wow...
Lol, I sound a lot like Cloud in your story xD |
 Beeria 2009-06-11 . chapter 21 OMG! Before I just read the last 3 chapters and at the end of the one before this chapter I thought to myself it would be funny if Aerith was pregnant and holy moly! Mind reader! haha.
Love the name Lightning. Sora and Roxas are like mini Cloud and Aerith but everyone uses them so Im glad you didnt.
Overall, good job. Hopefully you'll have more Clerith fics up soon! :)
~Beeria |
 Soul of AquaBlue 2009-06-07 . chapter 21o man i love this story!love cloud/aeris :]...the storyline are so awesome too!anyway i love the ending of the story...and the kid...awesome! lighting?like lighting from FFXI?light brown/pink hair with blue eyes...sweet! XD...anyway i wish you make s sequal to this that talks about the new family all three of them together :] |
 Mr X 2009-06-06 . chapter 21 I honestly do not expect that. Man you're awesome. The kid, that was delicious. Marvelous job. Looking forward for the next big thing. |
 Sephiroth WEAPON 2009-06-04 . chapter 1Hey, i just wanted to tell you that this story, no matter what your intentions, is definately the best fanfic i've ever read, and it's actually changed my life. just reading it (as a whole btw, not just the first chapter) put all my life into perspective... especially the bit after cloud met sephiroth right to the end. it just made so much sense. i have a girlfriend i've fallen out of love with, but i just didn't realise it till now... and this really showed me that i can't just leave it... i have to change it myself... and that i need to make my own decisions and find a person i really do love. i owe you one. best fanfic ever! could've done with a bit more development on the end though :P |
 Zerrat 2009-05-25 . chapter 21*laugh* Lightning? Well, I didn't see that one coming!
A nice wrap up to a sweet fic, I'm glad I've read it and enjoyed it.
Thanks for your time and effort in writing this! |
 Aeris1172 2009-05-23 . chapter 21*bursts into tears*
BAHAH AWH AWWHH... Anyway. *wipes away wetness* That was so fantastic! I was so totally not expecting the babeh girl darlin honey bunches of oats. And I LOVE that its Lightning. So kyute. oh man I can't believe I just spelled it like that either... Haha. Lovely! I can't wait for another Cleris fic from your fantastic self.
- Aeris |
 anon 2009-05-23 . chapter 19 damn love it!!
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“Mr. Shinra…” Cloud muttered.
“What!?”
“Go ** yourself.”
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love this part! |
 steffano 2009-05-23 . chapter 21 i think you should do a SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL please |
 Foi 2009-05-22 . chapter 21Aw so sweet, I love it. That was a beautiful ending for an awesome story. Your an amazing writer, hope to see more of yours work soon :D |
 K-9 Style 2009-05-22 . chapter 21 Whoo! What a long and exciting ride it's been! But that ending was very satisfying. I loved the allusion to FFXI's Lightning (if that was what you were trying to do...) I think it's cute that Cloud and Aerith ended up having a daughter. :) Awesome story! |
 LilyMione-chan 2009-05-22 . chapter 21Hi
aw, it's the end =/ But I'm happy, it was really a great ending! I laughed and smiled a lot. Cloud's daughter... ow, a bit harsh >_< though totally possible xD I ain't sure if Cloud would really go back if it wasn't for her...
Just didn't get what you meant when Aerith said "she’s either five months late". Aerith was in a relashionship 4 months before sleeping with Cloud??
Well, I think that it. I loved it, thanks for writing this fic. Hope you will write more *__*
Cheers! |