Short, sweet and just enough to put a smile on your face.

'Wow' is probably the best way to describe my reaction. I absolutely love this. Its so real and so absolutely picture perfect it feels like I can just see all of this actually going on. I still can't stop smiling at this just because it takes me by surprise that so few paragraphs actually hit it right on.

Love this to death! Please continue to write on!

This was a really good scene, dude! An enticing look into the thoughts of tony stark. very in-character and tear-inducing WITHOUT being cheesy or saccarhine at all. Bravo! :) :: adds this and you to all my fave-lists :: And you like the 'Gates too?! AWESOME! :) ~Sharma

Nicely done. Story packs a lot in just a few words, and the emotions feel just right for that scene-- especially the ending.

I enjoyed this-- thanks for sharing.

Very nice. I like it.