This is good start off.

Okay, I'm interested. :D I like it, suspenseful. ^_~ A little over-use on the name "Speed", though -- "he" or "his" would work just as well. And more detail! Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaepleasepleaeplease? :3

Anyway (heh ^^;) I look forward to the next update. Adding you to alerts right now. ;)

-Me

ooh, cliffy. can't wait for the update. great story ^_^