This was wonderful!

I love stories with Alice and Edward's first interactions. Very well done:)

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Wonderful!

I really loved this, it was so perfectly in-character, with the right amount of humour, sweetness and love.

This is one of those missing moments from the books that I always wondered about. Thank you for bringing it to life. I loved reading it, it was really amazing.

Excellent job!!

~Melody :)

Too cute! Love your version of Alica and Jasper!

I liked it!

I really liked this. I'd always wondered how this would have played out, since Edward can be a bit of a control-freak and having all of his possessions moved into the garage without his permission or prior knowledge while strangers took over his room would have been a memorable event. This seemed all very plausible and in character. Great job.

Haha, I loved Jasper in this fic. I twas really refreshing to read a fic that has him communicating more. =]

This was nice - Alice was very 'Alice-like' - but I would not have blamed Edward if he had been more annoyed about his stuff being moved!

I like how you used Jasper's future prey in the title.

This was really a great oneshot. I like how you capture the absurdity of the situation. Everyone has to quickly adjust to Alice's way and her confidence. Very funny.

My fav lies were the last two: Carlisle was wrong. I am going to like this.

That was an excellent ending!

Keep Writing!!

I liked this. I think you did a good job showing what happened when Alice and Jasper first arrived. =)

I loved it.

that's great!

I have plowed through a lot of stories here but yours are the best. I come away thoroughly satisfied after spending quality time with these characters that are so familiar and I love so much. In your hands, they are authentic and their actions/thoughts/conversations ring so true.
Your stories are vivid little movies that play in my head. I can't tell you how happy I am to find you. Thank you.

I love this! A very well written story!

LOVE it!

this was amazingly great.