 younggem 2009-09-12 . chapter 14This is great! please update soon(:
I can't wait for more susanxcaspian moments:DD |
 xVampirexBunnyx 2009-03-29 . chapter 14It's awesome. I really hope you'll update soon. Make that please, please, please update soon! |
 holly*sirius 2009-03-22 . chapter 8 Maybe he could stay on Platform 9 3/4 if he's on King's Cross. Not to make fun of you. That's the first thing that came to my mind when I heard King's Cross. |
 aricka.coeya 2009-03-05 . chapter 14i hope you update soon...great story :) |
 Nearly Indi-cent 2008-12-23 . chapter 14You better keep updating luv,
Its very exciting so far.
Keep going! |
 AndreaKay 2008-12-18 . chapter 14I am loving this story! I just finished reading it and am eager to what happens next. This is the one Suspian story where they are more like their characters in the movie and I love it. Keep it up and please keep updated! ;) |
 Geeky13 2008-12-07 . chapter 14LOVE IT! Please keep up the great work! |
 mistressbabette51 2008-12-04 . chapter 14Oh, my goodness! I'm so worried about everyone. I guess they couldn't make it to a shelter? How awful. I cannot imagine they must be going through. Oh, no, Peter..!!?? They need to get to a safer place. Oh, I'm biting my nails here!! Good job!
More please!!:D:D |
 mistressbabette51 2008-12-04 . chapter 13Ok, I've finally gotten around to reading these last few chapters! Wow... I'm enjoying this story so much. I want to buy the DVD NOW! *lol* Awesome visuals again with this, and I like how your story is progressing. Everyone is learning about each other, and slowly but surely accepting Caspian into their lives.
Oh, no, the London Blitz...?? How terrible for them all. It's very exciting and I'm on the each of my computer chair here!!
Onward! |
 The Salt Lake Queen 2008-11-30 . chapter 14Fantastic story! The bit about the Council of Elders really made me giggle...it's all absolutely delightful so far.
Strictly speaking, the war ought to be over by this point in the Narnia-England timeline. It was over by the end of LWW...but that doesn't matter, it's just me being pedantic. I could also say something about conscription, but that would be even less relevant...my apologies. I'm a bit of a freak for details.
Still, GORGEOUS. Update soon! |
 Soweird666 2008-11-27 . chapter 14*two thumbs up* |
 The Singer in White 2008-11-24 . chapter 14Hi there, remember me? : D
I've been waiting for these last two chapters for forever, lol. This was fantastic. Yay! *Claps.* The bombing was very descriptive and very real.
On Anton: Just a tip: You may know better than me since you're Dutch, but I was always given the impression that the Concentration camps were seen as rumors until the soldiers discovered them. But I think at least the older Pevensies would know of the persecution, because Kristilnacht would have made the news in London. (Yeah, I know I spelled that wrong). But, like I said, I was always under the impression that the existence of the camps were a rumor until they were actually found.
Other than that bit of advice, this was fantastic, and Anton came to me as a surprise. When he said to Caspian and the Pevensies that he left Germany two years ago, I knew immediately where you were taking it, lol.
Continue, continue!!
-Singerinwhite |
 cflat 2008-11-22 . chapter 14Great story! I've seen another Caspian comes to England story, but it was not at all like this. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 firehottie 2008-11-21 . chapter 14can't wait to read more! update soon! |
 mae-E 2008-11-20 . chapter 14Sorry i missed the update but when they dropped the number of reviews that one could look over i lost track of the story. but i'm going to put it on alret so that doesn't happen again.
chapters 13 and 14 were so intense! So is the whole thing with anton, a way of caspian learning a lesson about how he can intergrate his own people?
So what is rest of the man's story?
so is peter alright? or is he going to lose the use of his leg?
I see that in chapter 13 you jumped the time he was there from a few day to a month.
So after this day/night, is he going to try to convince the others to come back with him to his country where it is somewhat safer? just how much time as passed in his country?
I like how even someone new to this world could see that not all advancements were a good improvement.
So will they make it to the tube? what will happen then?
the action was quite exciting these past 2 chapters. So what is next? and when will the raid stop? will they make it home? will it still be there?
keep up the good work. |