I thought that this was an interesting story and that it was worded well.

Lol, I just can't believe how stupid and pathetic these people are! Chapter 1: "Are you so selfish that you won't think of our 'gods'; you only think about yourself?" What complete morons! Not that I'm saying that I dislike you or your story because of that, you did a good job with this.

I like it.

OMG that's so sad! Creepy but sad!!
if you want to contact me, send an email to Max. He said he'd show me the email and respond for me...

Hi, um, this guy Max told me I should check out your stories so I did... this story is pretty interesting, but I'm scared to know what she has to do for the gods.
Also, I was curious and wanted to go read some of your other stories, on your... i think it was called 'fictionpress'? account... but i couldn't review b/c you have it anonymous reviews disabled.

Interesting...

Very interesting take on what happened in the years of the "Inca-Maya-Cambodian-Egyptian-Aztec" when the predators had their Century hunts. I had thought of something similar, although it's partly written lying in a drawer in my desk. Maybe... maybe I'll finish that.

Very nicely done, Ali. Ah, and think I must apologize for my absence. I have a lot of reading to do now...

...thats it? no offense, but i was hoping for more...

he sure does have something interesting to look forward to. he's rather stupid... shoot just let her do her job and find some other girl

... way to make me throw up!! lol kidding! it was really good! as if it were really happening! i bet you enjoyed writing this, right?? lol... (oh, one mistake: "for out gods.")

OMG! You're improving in your writing skills so much! 'tears of joy' & 'pat on back' ... (although you might want to reread your summary)... I love it Ali!! You've won the 'greatest author of the week' again!!

Brr! an interesting a view onto the whole pyramid-thing - the view from the human sacrifice...still: BRR!

*chuckles* A bit short. I had thought this was going to lead to some Xenos romance story, but oh well.